Monday, June 27, 2011

grandma dot.

grandma dot
has got a lot
in her house
theres a mouse
a couch a  tin
a pin a gold fish
a blue dish
a fiddle
and me


e said...

great poem, fred!

Misrule said...

What a beautiful poem, Fred. I love the rhymes and the rhythm and the way it flows between the different things in Grandma Dot's house. Thank you!

The Digital Narrative said...

I love your new poem squeaks. :)

Anonymous said...

I love this poem. Especially the short 'and me' that's at the end. Fantastic!