I am one of Mr. Lee's students. I tink that you have a grest writing. I read all of your little poems and they are very creative. I can't wait till i could read other poems that you post on your blog.
When I was a kid my brother and I would find purple clover and pull the tiny little flowers off and suck the nectar out of the ends because it was so sweet.
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this is a beautiful poem! i think pavlova and clover is one of the best rhymes i've ever heard. you rock, fred!
Hi Frederique,
I am one of Mr. Lee's students.
I tink that you have a grest writing.
I read all of your little poems and they are very creative.
I can't wait till i could read other poems that you post on your blog.
~Melika~
When I was a kid my brother and I would find purple clover and pull the tiny little flowers off and suck the nectar out of the ends because it was so sweet.
This poem reminded me of those happy memories! :)
'I will eat my pavlova
in the land of clover.' is one of the greatest couplets I have ever heard and read. Thank you!
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